Overview: We have
been discussing the idea of self. How
does one become an authentic self? This
brings us back to "Allegory of a Cave" and the idea of enlightenment. Sometimes, we find ourselves when we least
expect it.
Directions: Please
read the following short story by Kate Chopin, and discuss the story using 2-3
direct quotations from the text. You may
comment on what surprises you, the meaning you find in the story, the use of
imagery, symbolism, how the ending makes you feel, and/or how you see connections in the
story to your own lives. As always,
please read your classmates’ responses and engage with each other. I look forward to your responses.
“The Story of an Hour” (1894)
by
Kate Chopin
Knowing that Mrs. Mallard was
afflicted with a heart trouble, great care was taken to break to her as gently
as possible the news of her husband's death.
It was her sister Josephine who
told her, in broken sentences, veiled hints that revealed in half concealing.
Her husband's friend Richards was there, too, near her. It was he who had been
in the newspaper office when intelligence of the railroad disaster was
received, with Brently Mallard's name leading the list of "killed."
He had only taken the time to assure himself of its truth by a second telegram,
and had hastened to forestall any less careful, less tender friend in bearing
the sad message.
She did not hear the story as many
women have heard the same, with a paralyzed inability to accept its
significance. She wept at once, with sudden, wild abandonment, in her sister's
arms. When the storm of grief had spent itself she went away to her room alone.
She would have no one follow her.
There stood, facing the open
window, a comfortable, roomy armchair. Into this she sank, pressed down by a
physical exhaustion that haunted her body and seemed to reach into her soul.
She could see in the open square
before her house the tops of trees that were all aquiver with the new spring
life. The delicious breath of rain was in the air. In the street below a
peddler was crying his wares. The notes of a distant song which some one was
singing reached her faintly, and countless sparrows were twittering in the
eaves.
There were patches of blue sky
showing here and there through the clouds that had met and piled above the other
in the west facing her window.
She sat with her head thrown back
upon the cushion of the chair, quite motionless, except when a sob came up into
her throat and shook her, as a child who has cried itself to sleep continues to
sob in its dreams.
She was young, with a fair, calm
face, whose lines bespoke repression and even a certain strength. But now there
was a dull stare in her eyes, whose gaze was fixed away off yonder on one of
those patches of blue sky. It was not a glance of reflection, but rather
indicated a suspension of intelligent thought.
There was something coming to her
and she was waiting for it, fearfully. What was it? She did not know; it was
too subtle and elusive to name. But she felt it, creeping out of the sky,
reaching toward her through the sounds, the scents, the color that filled the
air.
Now her bosom rose and fell
tumultuously. She was beginning to recognize this thing that was approaching to
possess her, and she was striving to beat it back with her will- as powerless
as her two white slender hands would have been.
When she abandoned herself a little
whispered word escaped her slightly parted lips. She said it over and over
under her breath: "Free, free, free!" The vacant stare and the look
of terror that had followed it went from her eyes. They stayed keen and bright.
Her pulses beat fast, and the coursing blood warmed and relaxed every inch of
her body.
She did not stop to ask if it were
or were not a monstrous joy that held her. A clear and exalted perception enabled
her to dismiss the suggestion as trivial.
She knew that she would weep again
when she saw the kind, tender hands folded in death; the face that had never
looked save with love upon her, fixed and gray and dead. But she saw beyond
that bitter moment a long procession of years to come that would belong to her
absolutely. And she opened and spread her arms out to them in welcome.
There would be no one to live for
her during those coming years; she would live for herself. There would be no
powerful will bending her in that blind persistence with which men and women
believe they have a right to impose a private will upon a fellow-creature. A
kind intention or a cruel intention made the act seem no less a crime as she
looked upon it in that brief moment of illumination.
And yet she had loved him-
sometimes. Often she had not. What did it matter! What could love, the unsolved
mystery, count for in face of this possession of self-assertion which she
suddenly recognized as the strongest impulse of her being!
"Free! Body and soul
free!" she kept whispering.
Josephine was kneeling before the
closed door with her lips to the keyhole, imploring for admission.
"Louise, open the door! I beg; open the door- you will make yourself ill.
What are you doing, Louise? For heaven's sake open the door."
"Go away. I am not making
myself ill." No; she was drinking in a very elixir of life through that
open window.
Her fancy was running riot along
those days ahead of her. Spring days, and summer days, and all sorts of days
that would be her own. She breathed a quick prayer that life might be long. It
was only yesterday she had thought with a shudder that life might be long.
She arose at length and opened the
door to her sister's importunities. There was a feverish triumph in her eyes,
and she carried herself unwittingly like a goddess of Victory. She clasped her
sister's waist, and together they descended the stairs. Richards stood waiting
for them at the bottom.
Some one was opening the front door
with a latchkey. It was Brently Mallard who entered, a little travel-stained,
composedly carrying his grip-sack and umbrella. He had been far from the scene
of accident, and did not even know there had been one. He stood amazed at
Josephine's piercing cry; at Richards' quick motion to screen him from the view
of his wife.
But Richards was too late.
When the doctors came they said she
had died of heart disease - of joy that kills.
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ReplyDeleteRobbie Mahlebjian
ReplyDeleteWhile I was reading this story I thought about a lot of things one of those things were really deep. You are always authentic because you can not be exactly like a person you have different traits and personalities than one another. Does anyone agree?
I agree with you Robbie
DeleteSuhani
DeleteI love how you summed up your answer in a very straightforward way! I totally agree with your point of view!
Sean curtis
ReplyDeleteWhile i was reading the story I found a quote that said "Go away. I am not making myself ill." I thought this was a great example of dramatic irony seeing as how she feel ill and died. I also think the story was very deep and I agree with robbie when he said people are always authentic because everyone is different in there own way and it seperates everyone apart from each other.
Nick Entner
ReplyDeleteThis story had many twist and turns that I was not expecting. When the woman gets excited after this quote “ There would be no one to live for her during those coming years” was odd to me. This would not normally happen to people when a person in there life dies. I guess she was tied down and after his death she was released from the chains. But then when the husband comes back the wife dies. “When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease - of joy that kills.” This shows that when you are released form the cave it is very hard to go back and live the same way you live before. I thought the ending was different than anything that i had ever heard.
good work Nick
Deletethank you nick very cool
DeleteI agree that that quotes wording was a little weird, but the author was trying to say that the wife didn't have to work for her husband anymore.
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Robbie Mahlebjian
ReplyDeleteWho thinks the women is evil like why would she be happy because her husband died it took a an hour to mourn then she was like "I'm free". Like I mean look at what she is saying "She said it over and over under her breath: 'Free, free, free!'" she said she was free from her loving husband it took her an hour to be happy about his death.
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DeleteJillian Boyer
ReplyDeleteReading this in class was my second time reading this,the first was just at home. The first time I read this, I was thoroughly confused but at the same time I thought I had grasped the deeper message… I guess I was wrong. I was convinced that she was happy throughout the story because she had decided to kill herself. That is obviously very, very morbid, but her husband just died right? I also had forgotten the characters names so when the husband came home, I did not know who he was and read the paragraph over and over to try and figure out what was going on. It helped me a lot to o over this in class. I had alo forgot what time period it was, maybe I would have been more on track if I had remembered.
Anthony
ReplyDeleteThis story was very different from other ones I have read in the past. This story surprised me in different ways. One way the story surprised me was when the husband came home when everybody thought he was dead.It was Brently Mallard who entered, a little travel-stained, composedly carrying his grip-sack and umbrella. He had been far from the scene of accident, and did not even know there had been one. Another way the story surprised me was when she died of a heart attack at the end of the story. When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease - of joy that kills. This story made me realize how women did not want to be married back in the day and they wanted to be free.
thanks anthony very cool!
DeleteAfter reading the story, I could see how it can be symbolism. It shows a time when you are enlightened, and go back to the time you were not. It is tough to go back. If you got big news and that enlightened you. In this case the wife found out her husband died and reacted differently then what she thought. She was enlightened with the information that she was actually happy with the fact that her husband died, giving her new information about herself. She was so happy that her husband had died.'"Free! Body and soul free!" she kept whispering."' She was finally "free". In the story "There was something coming to her and she was waiting for it, fearfully. What was it? She did not know; it was too subtle and elusive to name. But she felt it, creeping out of the sky, reaching toward her through the sounds, the scents, the color that filled the air." She did not know how she would react, showing that she was enlightened
ReplyDeleteDowol Lee
DeleteI agree dowol is right
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DeleteYasmiin ALi
ReplyDeleteWhat surprised me the most about this story is when the wife saw the husband and died to see him alive. The meaning that I found in this story was how one single feeling of being controlled can be misinterpreted as love and heartbreak. An example of that would be, “She knew that she would weep again when she saw the kind, tender hands folded in death; the face that had never looked save with love upon her, fixed and gray and dead.”(paragraph 13). This part shows you how controlled she felt with him and how she was probably forced to marry him. The ending of the story really stood out to me because after reading the story and imagery used in it I finally understood it. When you get to the last paragraph you understand how she felt about him, “When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease - of joy that kills.” That line definitely stood out to me the most because she died seeing her boss alive instead of her husband. Thankfully I haven't experienced a death of a loved one before. However sometimes I have felt sadness and grief before, and it doesn’t feel good.
Jacob Moore
DeleteI would have to agree with your statement Yasmiin
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DeletePS: "The meaning that I found in this story was how one single feeling of being controlled can be misinterpreted as love and heartbreak." I didn't realize that until you wrote it Yazzi! Very interesting point of view of the story!
Dylan Brenner
DeleteI agree with this as well.
Jacob moore
ReplyDeleteI think the story was about how Mrs. Mallard was almost enlightend by the death of her husband. For example she had said She said it over and over under her breath: "Free, free, free!" paragraph 10. I think that she was saying how she was free from a life of being a housemaid forher husband and now she can finally do things that she wouldent of been abl to do. Also in paragraph 17 she says "Go away. I am not making myself ill." to her sister who had belived that she was killing herself by giving herself a heart attack but instead she was actually taking in the outside because she was free.
I think the imagery in the story was based off of the allegory of the cave because she was trapped inside her house and her husband acted like the shackles that bound her from seeing the real world. One connection I have to this story is when my great uncle died because he had Alzheimer. It had got to the point where it was depressing to see him because he couldn't remember who you were so when he passed away there was a bit of relief because the stress was gone but it was still very sad to see him go.
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DeleteCelia Hoffman
ReplyDeleteThis story really surprised me. I didn't expect it to be so similar to the Allegory of a Cave. When Mrs. Mallard said "Free, free, free", I wasn't really sure what she meant but I remembered that in 1894, woman didn't have much say and were almost trapped in there marriage. When Mrs. Mallard thought her husband had died, she mourned but she became enlightened and realized she was free. I was surprised at how dark this felt but also I understood that she would feel that way.
After being enlightened, she had to re-enter the cave because her husband was still alive. “When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease - of joy that kill.” When everyone thought she had a heart attack because she was so happy her husband had come back alive, she actually couldn't handle being “enslaved” by her marriage anymore.
Suhani
DeleteYes! I didn't realize how much it connects to the Allegory of the Cave! It's very interesting how they brought up enlightenment in such a twisted way in this story, don't you think?
Mikey DiCezno
ReplyDeleteOne example “When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease - of joy that kills”. I this quote she saw that her husband came home and had a heart attack because she was so happy. I think if she didn't see her husband come home that she still would've had a heart attack because she would have been so excited and sad at the same time that her heart wouldn't have been able to take it
Another example, “She knew that she would weep again when she saw the kind, tender hands folded in death; the face that had never looked save with love upon her, fixed and gray and dead”. In this part of the story you can picture a woman weeping and crying because of the recent passing of the husband
What surprised me most in the story was when Richard tried to block the view of the husband Brently so the wife wouldn't die or get hurt. This surprised me because you think the wife would want to see her husband who she thinks was dead.
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DeleteSuhani
DeleteI totally agree with you Mikey! It's really interesting how you brought up Richard trying to block the wife! I would also think that the wife would want to see her husband who she thinks was dead. Love the quotes!
Thanks Mike Very cool!
ReplyDeletejacob moore
Deletewhat a great answer keep up the good work
Suhani Karki
ReplyDeleteJust like Nick, I think that this short story by Kate Chopin had many twists and turns because of how Mrs. Mallard acts. When Mr. Pellrin read the first paragraph or two about Mrs. Mallard losing her husband, it was very dull. Typically, in most stories of people losing their loved ones they usually get sad and depressed and isolate themselves. Just as Mrs. Mallard did when she found out: “She wept at once, with sudden, wild abandonment, in her sister's arms...She would have no one follow her…”.
All of a sudden Mrs. Mallard sits in her chair, and the whole story turns around, and it doesn't seem like natural grieving. Just as the author describes what Mrs. Millard is seeing “She could see in the open square before her house the tops of trees that were all aquiver with the new spring life. The delicious breath of rain was in the air.” Mrs. Mallard then becomes joyful and happy that her husband has died because she developed a sense of freedom. Which makes sense in some twisted way because as a widow, Mrs. Millar inherits the house, the money, and she can control what her day looks like, and she starts thinking about all the possibilities.
Hanna Saad
ReplyDeleteWhen miss mallard thought her husband was dead she had a moment of enlightenment. Then she thought to herself that she can do anything that she wanted from this quote "I'm free free". Then she saw her husband was still alive she died from a heart attack. She was enlightened then was enlightens to death of shock realizing she wasn't free again.
Xingyun Pan
ReplyDelete“She could see in the open square before her house the tops of trees that were all aquiver with the new spring life.” It’s means she suddenly felt the world is so beautiful because of the freedom. She must see those images before but she just didn’t think they are beautiful. After she “gets free” she felt everything is just so beautiful.
“When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease - of joy that kills.”Everyone else thought that she was so happy so she died but for an audience we know that she died because she cannot handle the truth. She can’t imagine that her life doesn’t change and she needs to go back to the cave again. Once you came out, you’ll find the world is so beautiful so you don’t want to get back in the cave again.
Dylan Brenner
ReplyDeleteThis story was very different from others I have read in the past. Something that surprised me was when Mrs. Mallard’s husband, Brently entered when everybody thought he had been dead, “Someone was opening the front door with a latchkey. It was Brently Mallard who entered, a little travel-stained, composedly carrying his grip-sack and umbrella”. This surprised me mostly because he was nowhere to be found in the scene. He didn’t even know anything that was happening. Another thing that surprised me was when she had died of joy from seeing her husband, “When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease - of joy that kills”. Everybody thought that she died because of how happy she was to see her husband, but we know that she really just didn’t want to be with her husband anymore.
Griffin Littlewood
ReplyDeleteWhat surprised me the most in this passage was in the end when Mrs.Mallard died from a heart attack after seeing her presumed dead husband. ''When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease - of joy that kills.". I chose this quote to show how the world thought of her death and how it was joy that gave her the heart attack but really when she died she felt freedom from her controlling life, she was at peace. I feel at the same time that it is so messed up that her only way to be free was by death of her husband or herself. An important quote was ''Into this she sank, pressed down by a physical exhaustion that haunted her body and seemed to reach into her soul.''. I feel that in this is when she realized that she was free.
Olivia Dionisio
ReplyDeleteI did not believe that was going to be how the story was going to end. When she found out her husband was "dead" she was shocked but also somewhat happy. Due to her heart problems, her family was trying to shun her from all this bad information so she wouldn't die, but she still ended up dying. She didn't die from grief she died from joy, "When the doctors came they said she had died of hear disease- of joy that kills.". I found this interesting because she died because she was so excited because she believed she was free of something holding her down.
Luke Newton
ReplyDeleteThe ending to this story really surprised me. When we began reading it i thought Mrs. Mallard would die from sadness after finding out her husband died, but it turns out that was not the case. She was relieved almost that her husband had supposedly died. “She could see in the open square before her house the tops of trees that were all aquiver with the new spring life.” This quote stood out to me because it showed that her new life had began and she was going to be free to make her own decisions.
Evan Lin
ReplyDeleteAfter Mrs. Mallard learned about her husbands death, she was overcome with grief, but shortly after, she becomes happy, and starts whispering "Free, free, free!", because she knows that he will no longer be controlling her life. She knows that "there would be no powerful will bending her in that blind persistence with which men and women believe they have a right to impose a private will upon a fellow-creature."
At the end of the story, Mrs. Mallard ends up dying from a heart attack caused by joy. The joy may have been caused by the realization that she was free, or seeing her husband alive, as she loved him, yet wanted to be away from him.
Shruthi Saravanan
ReplyDeleteThis story was overall interesting there was a different style in the writing itself from how authors write short stories in the present day. Though this style helped keep up with the interesting story as well. Usually, if there was a story of a woman losing her husband suddenly with would show just pure sadness, sorrow and miserable if they had a good life together. Though in this story it started to go on that path in places like her in the empty armchair, “when a sob came up into her throat and shook her.” Though as the story went on Mrs. Mallard started giving slight hints on how she was actually feeling about her husband being dead all of a sudden. She was feeling for free and open, in other words, happy. “She said it over and over under her breath: "Free, free, free!" She now felt that she has one huge thing that she doesn’t need to worry about, something that will make her life now more relaxing. “There would be no powerful will bending her in that blind persistence”. Though to make this story even more surprising than it already is, it ends up that Mrs. Mallard’s husband never died and that he wasn’t even at the scene. Then to end this unexpected story Mrs. Mallard ends up dying due to “heart disease - of joy that kills”.